Homecoming | A Chronicles of Ascension Story

Is this novel in hiatus? This was picked right? Well if i do remember myself. Why it isn't updating anymore? ???I was really looking forward to it though its kinda mixed up

I have no idea why this trash has nothing but 4 and 5 star ratings... The only thing that passes 1 star is the translation quality. We have a bipolar moron for an MC whos somehow a useless pervert and the most liked priest in the local church at the same time. A VR game that MC plays by using a controller... Thats right hes using a controller to play a game that has apparently so realistic VR system that not having a pain option causes you to forget even real life pain which is also the reason why MC refuses to use it...you know...because he doesn't like pain... So how does he compete with other people while pretending his holographic projections on the walls somehow match the realism of the actual VR system that creates a world in your mind where you enter the character and live and fight as the character? Its obvious really! He has a set of finger exercises for the control which in the very first chapter are proven to be nothing but childish coin tricks. This combined with his ability to see around his fake avatar he made fat on purpose grants him absolute not a fucking thing since author seems to have no idea how human body works... So whats his edge then? I bet every one guessed already! That's right! Its fucking plot armor! Since there's no fucking way his fat fingers would ever in any way come even close an actual thought controlled system the only advantage he has is his memories (which is funny since even tho he used the game as a source of income he apparently has very minimal knowledge of anything basic in game starting from the classes...) and his class which turns out that for 5 years everyone of the billions of players never realized that their stat distribution was wrong... A non sword wielding human avatar in a Chinese VR novel is the only + I can give the rest just makes you wonder why is this trash here in the first place...

Keep going author. 2 of your novels is in my library so keep going. and I love the star wars fan fic novel of yours. The World is Big yet we can only see the small part of it.The World is Big yet we can only see the small part of it.The World is Big yet we can only see the small part of it.The World is Big yet we can only see the small part of it.just a additional word count.

          I met a woman named Claire Redfield. Claire helped me when I was roaming the Racoon City Hall, I didn't know what to do because I walked away when this Albert tried to stop us. Many things happened, many people died. "Hey Derrick wanna go exploring outside?" Claire said "OK" I said "Wait don't forget your gun. " Claire said. We are all limited in this world,we have to use weapon when going out, we have to be safe, we have to be brave. Claire taught me how to use a gun. It was heavy at first and it has a loud sound that echos on my ears. It was loud at first but I got it now. It was a loud bang. I had too many questions. Is dad still alive?, are we all going to be safe here?, will the world going to be back again?, will Umbrella solve this problem or are we all going to die out here?.

Respondió Declan estrechando su mano.

*He chuckled and they shared a kiss, a kiss that they were holding back on for 8 entire years...A kiss that was long undue